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I've got pavypavy's.

[TOWERS_85_87]

Hello LBP Community,

@ pavypavy

@ beatdough

@ Filipeq        

@ Ei8htBits

@ Mugster1

Before any further reviews are done we would like to know if you prefer to have a review or enter our LBR (LittleBIGReviewers) Platinum Trophy competition. Check out our custom trophy here. Please make sure to read all the rules and respond as soon as possible. Thank you.

                                                                TOWERS_85_87 (LittleBIGReviewers)  

Message Edited by TOWERS_85_87 on 09-02-2009 09:51 PM

[Filipeq]

Sorry, but i would like only to review, becouse i'm lame at makeing levels. I'll train and then i'll start in another competition.

[Ei8htBits]

I would love to, but I don't have enough posts on this site

[Prattz]

Maybe could you review my level, "Sack Mage In The Swamp?" for me?

My PSN ID is Prattz.

I know it's not perfect, but I'm thinking at least 3 stars...

Here's the link to the promo thread, where you could see a video of the level.

It's my best published level. I have a better unpublished level being made.

Also, it's only got about 20-30 plays, I think...

[TOWERS_85_87]

Hello requesters and readers !!

Here is our most current level review request lineup

gocubsgo2:

• 'Stranded Part 1-Arrival' by pavypavy
• 'The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time (Part 1) SNEAK PEEK' by Ei8htBits

• 'The Lair 1.0 (The Break In)' by beatdough

Myself:

• 'One Piece Vol 3: Amazon Lily' by battlefranky
• 'Sackbond and Golden Bar' by Filipeq
• 'Sack Mage In The Swamp' by Prattz

Awaiting replies from:

• Mugster1 (Machinery Unleashed)

                                                           TOWERS_85_87 (LittleBIGReviewers)

Message Edited by TOWERS_85_87 on 09-03-2009 08:37 PM

[TOWERS_85_87]

One Piece vol 3 : Amazon Lily

AUTHOR (PSN ID): Kazim-Kazim23 (battlefranky)

CATEGORY: Story/Boss

DIFFICULTY: [Medium]

LEVEL LOCATION: Virginia (East of North America)

TIME OF PLAY: Approx 7 minutes

Promotional Post

PROS:

This is the third installment of the One Piece levels created by this author. The story is now set in Amazon Lily. It is an island where only women have roamed for an undetermined amount of time. Once they see something out of the ordinary (you, a sackperson), some of them consider you evil and decide to make you must fight against them. I did my homework and searched for a website where I could view all the episodes regarding the title. I watched episodes 408 through 415. This being the first time I watched the series I must say that the author did a pretty good job. The author's overall skills have improved. One of these aspects is evident by his specific scene selections to explain the story. Even if I would have not seen the episodes, the story is able to be understood and comprehensible. All the characters are now labeled so it helps the story a lot. Another thing that was improved was the attention to detail to the environment. This was achieved through the help of stickers and decorations. It is visible in the forest and in the exterior/interior parts of the castle. Added details that pertain to the story like the hole on the ground at the beginning and the newspaper add with Ace at the end is a bonus for any fan. The characters have maintained their incredible expressions due to the author's undying dedication to them. The icon is nicely made and the level description well written. 

CONS:

The content of the author's levels has improved, but the gameplay has more or less stayed the same. Like the previous installments, you typically walk around and have a bit of gameplay that includes jumping and boss battles. Even though the author has been making characters for a while now it comes as a surprise to me that movements have not been added to them yet.

NITPICKS:

• Slang and wrong grammar is found throughout the whole level.

OVERALL RATING:  3/5  Worth Playing! [level and author not hearted]

SUGGESTIONS:

• As it has been pointed out before, the grammar always seems to get in the way. Try to use proper grammar so that it does not take away credit from the level. It could be costing you hearts since it makes it look a bit unprofessional. Some of them are simply due to that some words need capitalization. Read the following and fix them when you can:

1. In level description, it will look much better like this (If you have reached your maximum character/letter count then make is resemble this as close as possible): "Sent by Kuma, Amazon Lily is a jungle island inhabited by the Kuja. Their village is located inside a mountain, but time is running out when you find out your brother Ace is going to be executed. The only person that could help you is Boa!! *1 Player*".
2. Aphelandra: Wow, you're a tiny one! You should find something to eat.
3. Aphelandra: You can move the bed around of you want (R1)
4. Margaret: Pisst! I'm going to help you escape! Jump on the switch and press R1.
5. Sweetpea (Not sweatpea): He's escaping. Shoot him!!!
6. Boa: How dare you trespass on my land?!
7. Boa: For trespassing, I order you to the battle arena where you must fight my two sisters!

• To reinforce what happens at the beginning of the level where the player falls in the hole, you should add four small holes to complete the bear paw mark that is seen in the episode.
• Once the player smashes the ground rocks should be emitted upward and to the sides to make the illusion of an impact. Emitters are slightly tricky to use initially, but it gets pretty easy after a while. I recommend that you play around with the functions and try to add this suggestion.
• Add two magic mouths to explain what happened here at the beginning as well. These two magic mouths quotes directly from the series as you have done before. The first one should have: "I survived..Doesn't seem like I survived because Im rubber". The second magic mouth then should say: "but what's this things thing that looks like a bear's footprint?". Make sure to add a camera angle to this second magic mouth so that it shows the footprint from a top view.
• Add cracks inside the prison cell so that it looks like the episode.
• Aphelandra did not have her giant sword. I would add it.
• You should start to give movement to your characters so that they look more vivid.
• Add curtains and chandeliers to the palace at the end of the level so that it also looks more like the episode too.
• Add a skull sticker to the bedpost so that it also looks like the one that appears in the series.
• To help promote your level, update your promotional post with the level's name and some photos.

Message Edited by TOWERS_85_87 on 09-03-2009 08:08 PM

[pavypavy]

ohh tank you sooooooooooooo much i cant wait for my review but plz keep in mind this was my first level so it lacks deatil but im promise the second one will have atleast 20 hours of work into it u can trust me a kept 87% of my promises

[FIshrock123-]

I'd like one of my levels reviewed please.

PSN: Fishrock123

Level: Waterfall temple ~ part 1 - gaining entrance

Notes: the level name includes [Update v1.6!]

Also, This level tends to have 'lag' due to effects.

P.S. If your really up to finding stuff, try finding all my prizes.

Thanks.

[nathannj]

hey, i am currently working on a level, elite planet protector and i released a beta for it, and i was woindering if you guys could review it? I worked quite hard on it, and i want to know what to add as the finishing touches to make it perfect oh and the space ship is supposed to do that (you will see what i mean when you review it )

level name: epp beta

PSN: nathannj