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[Sehven]

I'd like to request a review for my new level.

Psn: Sehven

Level name: War of Souls Chapter One

[rantwan]

I'd like a review for my level.

psn: Thekevinexpress

It's called LBL:Fairytale- Sackerella and the Red Stiletto race!

I really had to rush to meet the contest deadline, so I know there is stuff that still needs fixing. So towers or whoever does review, please be very picky.

Thanks!

[Vex_Doppel]

I'd like a review of my level please.

PSN: Vex_Doppel

Level: Arctic

[Montegro]

Could you review my level, Airsack Part One please? Thank you!

[anidais]

Hello, it's been a long time, please review my new level: Sunken Lair It's a nice level.

[scdenley]

i'll be posting my reviews of cardboard mountain ,  rusted 1: the rescue misson  , and the daily commute tomorrow. thank you for your patience.

[SprintGamer]

Please review!

PSN: Xg4m3r-

Level: Moon (Updated)

[TOWERS_85_87]

Here is the latest level review distribution line up:

Note: The main purpose of this list is to place all the new requests in order of submission. The distribution has remained practically the same except for "The Daily Commute" by SiLeNtEcHoS; which was taken by the reviewer scdenley.Thank you for taking the inniciative.

 

gocubsgo2:

• "Colourless Haiku Lizard Ray Wheel Super Bagel" by TubaDude49
• "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (Part 1)" by Xg4m3r-

jaslow:

• "The Monsters: Undiscovered Land" by Cephart

Cannibal606:

• "Not Another Crane Game!" by DarkDedede
• "Playstation HOME" by  sgtJARHEADxX

TheBlackTabard:

• "Leap of Faith 3 (OSP)" by i_r_me

scdenley:

• Cardbord Mountain by septamus112 (If the reviewer still wishes to provide a review, then it will be considered the official one as it was originaly assigned to him).
• "Rusted 1: The Rescue Mission" by countruby
• "The Daily Commute" by SiLeNtEcHoS

Myself:

• "North Pole Adventure" by toxictroop
• "The_Mighty_Pono" by The Crossroad Temple

If any reviewer finds himself without a level to review feel free to select from the levels below or review a level you played online:

1. "Desert Outpost" by GelonHair (Level must be checked by author before being reviewed)
2. The New Sackcity by Paulcity123
3. Mysterious Planet: Black Ore by Camdem1
4. War of Souls Chapter One by Sehven
5. It's called LBL:Fairytale- Sackerella and the Red Stiletto race! by Thekevinexpress
6. Arctic by Vex_Doppel
7. Airsack Part One by Montegro
8. Sunken Lair by anidais
9. Moon by Xg4m3r-

                                                            TOWERS_85_87

                                                         - LittleBIGReviewers -

P.S.

• If I overlooked anyone's level please let me know.

Levels that cannot be found regardless of the search engine been fixed:

• "Space World 2" by Caseymike1
• "World of twisted stars" by Animespora

[gocubsgo2]

COLOURLESS HAIKU LIZARD RAY WHEEL SUPER BAGEL

AUTHOR: TubaDude49

DIFFICULTY: [Medium]

CATEGORY: Platformer

POSITIVES: The title was strange, seemingly a mishmash of unrelated words, but it caught my attention, that's for sure.

NEGATIVES:

-There is unstickered dissolve material at the beginning of the level, and indeed throughout it.  It is considered unprofessional by the community at large to have unstickered/un-covered-up dissolve in a level.  I suggest stickering/decorating it.

-There is dark matter visible by the mouth of the lizard.  It is considered unprofessional by the community at large to have visible dark matter.  I suggest hiding it out of sight.

-The level seemed very random, with no unifying theme or concept.  This can be a positive in some cases, but it was simply TOO random, in my opinion, with no obvious or discernible theme.

-After the rocket-vehicle section, the whole platform/area is built out of dark matter and nothing else.  It's unprofessional to have any visible dark matter, as said above.  Also, there were no stickers, decorations, or visual enchancements of any kind.  I suggest spending a lot more time on this section, improving it, putting much more effort forth.

-I saw The Collector, made by Media Molecule themselves, in the abovementioned dark matter section.  It's considered, well, lazy to have Mm-made objects in a level.  I suggest replacing The Collector with a new, custom-made villain/character.

-I saw the butler-type enemy from the Wedding levels, made by Mm.  For the same reason as replacing the Collector, I suggest you replace this character as well.

-The giant wheel was confusing.  I definitely do not suggest using glass for the platforms, set against the background that is there now.  I couldn't see where I was jumping most of the time.

-The giant wheel moved too fast to be able to get out of it in a reasonably short amount of time.  I suggest slowing the wheel down and testing and checking to see what speed is just right.

-At the checkpoint after exiting the wheel, there is no jetpack.  If the player somehow lost his/her jetpack, it would be impossible to finish the level.  Place a jetpack at that checkpoint.

-A short ways after the aforementioned checkpoint, there is a visible player proximity switch.  Make it invisible.

-At the boss battle, there were numerous things wrong.  First, the camera angle did not show the boss, so it was really luck to hit the boss at all.  Second, the boss was a simple Mm-made object; make it your own!  Make it custom!  Third, the whole setting was built out of dark matter.  This is a large "no-no."

-The visuals were subpar.  I found little eye candy.  They don't have to be spectacular, only adequate.  However, they were not.

NITPICKS:

-Look at the level description.  I saw a few grammar errors in the last two sentences.  It's unprofessional to not have good grammar and spelling in a level.  I suggest fixing it.

SUGGESTIONS:

-Look into, consider, or implement the negatives and nitpick.

NOTES: I always try to be objective in my reviews, and I believe I have in this.  My rating is my honest, objective opinion of the level. 

OVERALL RATING: 1/5 stars; [not hearted or author-hearted]

Message Edited by gocubsgo2 on 01-16-2010 05:28 PM

[justsayno2girls]

I'd like to request a review for my level. Thanks.

Psn: justsayno2girls

Level name: The Sinking of the Princess Elysia in Real Water